"Autumn" Rush

[ProtoCreed]

Name: Rush

Age: 2 years

Rank: Omega

Gender: Female

Mate: none

Pack: Su'Tera

Breed of Wolf: She is a Doberman Arctic wolf mix.

Describe your Wolf: Rush has a golden yellow eye color, much representing a falcon. Her eyes are watchful and intelligent, like her father. She has mostly white fur with some black streaks in her fur. However, she also has an orange/red/brown front left leg Giving her the nickname "Autumn" Rush.

Personality: Stubborn but loyal. She often hates having the leader tell her what to do but she listens anyway. Rush hates being picked on or insulted, but never attacks. Though she has her limits. (Hard to come up with personality, or rather, hard to put it into words.)

History: Rush was the result of a Loner and the now dead Healer of Su'tera. Her mother (Being superstisious) tried to kill the pup because of her front left leg. Her father tried to stop her, only to get her throat slit but her mothers frantic slashes. When she smelled the blood, she snapped out of the frenzy and felt depressed. She turned the pup over to her mates pack, and she remained there.

Fun fact: Is possibly the Half-sister of Shaman(I think thats what we agreed)

Picture: Ill draw one eventually.

[Starry]

Hey, it's very nice but she needs more personality before she can be accepted. Try and put some more, like how she is observant and so on.

Also the history could use some work but, its fine the way it is.

[ProtoCreed]

ok ill try to work on it a little

[Starry]

Thank you~ I'll accept her personality now, but Cookie told me to look at your history. You need to change it or discuss with Cookie about it, I believe she sent you a PM.

After that is all fixed up, then she will be accepted~

Thanks Proto~